'The Old wooden ship clique - the futura' 1st tune finished (feedback?)

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  1. WorldonFire

    WorldonFire No Pressure

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    I like that mate, its spot on for the first track you have finished.

    The only feedback would be to give it more of a break, by taking some of the percussion out and then building it back up before it comes back in. Thats purely personal taste though would be the only comment that i would make as would give it more impact when it comes back in after the break and would break up the repetitiveness of some of the percussion.

    I like the way it builds for the first 3 mins or so, when the bass comes in and then the riff. Some really nice elements to it, impressive stuff for your first attempt. Thumbs up from me. :up:
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    cheers for the feedback :)

    Might come back to it and have abit of a muck on with some more automation on my synths to make it less repetitive.
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    aye liked this matey, still can't understand your alias tho :lol:

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